EthanLewis

you should just stop playing magic

but i'd try some artifact equipment.
id suggest to you some sick equip, but then you'd be jackin my combo :P

make feast of blood 2, and add 4 quag sickness

corrupt costs wayyyy too much for what it does. replace it for more removal.
malakir bloodwitch is... eh, not really that great.
you'd be better off with a kasatria highborn, or even a drana, kalastria bloodchief.
vampire lacerator is a pain. not worth it.
and abyssal persecutor, even though he's not a vampire, a 4 drop for 6/6 flying is beast.
then get rid of him with gatekeeper of malakir.
also, blade of the bloodchief is an amazing equip.
take out child of night for 2 more captivating vampires, too. c.o.n is one of my most hated vampires, lol.
other than that, looks solid

Anytime, bro (:

terramorphic expanse/evolving winds are great cards. the best fetch lands in the game.
the point of them is, yes, if you were to draw a plains, you'd be able to use it right away, but if you drew a t.e (terramorphic expanse) you could fetch a land, there by reducing the chances of drawing something you dont wish to draw.
so basically, adding in 4 t.e. is making your deck 56 cards instead of 60. so now you have a 1 in 56 chance of drawing w/e card you need.

and w.o.o is wall of omens, great card for lifegain.

I'd definitely add a felidar sovereign. he's a staple in my opinion.
and wall of omens is always nice, i'd replace lone missionary with a w.o.o.
and also, 22 basic lands? i'd add in some terramorphic expanses, or evolving wilds.
other than that, it looks alright. just mess around with it.
buttt, looking at your description, sun titan is a nice little bit of mana to bring out.
try not to add too many +5 mana drops.

seems like there's a lot going on, with no real guide line.
nemesis of reason seems like you're aiming for mill, and if so, try and add more mill cards.
i.e. sword of body and mind = a sick equip, and amazing mill. not too expensive either.
and if you don't want mill, and some cheaper beatsticks.
roil elemental is good, but for a 6 drop, 3/2... i would just go for an anowan the ruin sage, or even an abyssal persecutor.
like the comments above me said, remove all the draw cards. anddd rise from the grave costs way too much.
hope i helped

Alright man, thanks (:
and i guess if i ever got my opponent down to 0, i could just target myself to sacrifice him.
but again, thanks !

thanks man!
I was honnestly thinking about ditching nirkana, i just like her for the mana ramp.
i only run 1 kalitas because hes a 7 drop, but his effect is amazing.
anowon is a personal favorite, lol.
i forgot to add hexmage to my sideboard, shes a planeswalker killer for sure!

and about abyssal persecutor, the you cant win and your opponent cant lose, that doesn't really sound all that great to me.
i chose quag for the fact that it can take out industrcutibles, and it doesn't specify colors.
doom blade wont do me well against black. so i could keep quag, side board doom blade, and also sideboard 2 consuming vapours, incase im going againt another quick removal deck.

sound good?
im really looking for nirkana replacements, something to give my deck a little bit more strategy. maybe diabolic tutor? maybe even painful quandary, for card advantage and removal.
i really appreciate your help, :)

I'd take out the trigon for a corpse cur. and also, get some beatsticks. i.e. skithiryx, hes practically a staple in infect. 2 would do.

I searched up "jund" specifically so I could ask what exactly a jund deck is.
I'm new to mtg, so it would help me understand some conversations on posts.
Sorry if you were expecting critique, but hey, i cant critique it if I don't know what it is.
thanks (:

It that betrays is good, but for 12 mana thats a lot.
and i can see how a few cards in here would help you reach the mana faster (crypt of agadeem) but a good card you may want to consider is nirkana revenant.
you'd be able to drop it that betrays turn 7

To the comment above me, turnmebackup, i love green and black.
but yeah, i deffinitely agree with mimic vat. Anddd whispersilk cloak is a great equip.
Green gives the deck fast power, plus you can throw in an asceticism to protect your guys, with green, and putrefax is always nice.
proliferate is good with blue (i.e. inexorable tide) but if you're proliferating, you could just be attacking with another poison creature. It's faster.
Now, proliferate can add way more, if planned out well, but still, the only reason i was going to consider adding blue, besides proliferate, was control, but to me, poison is supposed to be fast and easy.
Also, a realllly good insant to have, is untamed might. It's a beast for it's cost.

Alright, just looked it up, and sorry :P
I'm relatively new, and just thought EDH was like.. whatever you wanted to name your deck.
Sorry man, I play standard so i guess i got it set in my head 60 cards.
if you could check my vampire deck, it would help a lot xD
Sorry, again, my bad :)

hahaha well sorry xD what in gods name in edh :P

ohmygod. narrow it down!
you want to pic your best cards, and get multiple copies of them, then, once you decide the strategy you want to use to win, add cards with accent that strategy.
looks like you're reading the cards separately, not inter-twining them together to make for a solid combo.
like i said, make some combos, and make it 60 cards.

I've never really seen a mill deck, using blue, without a jace beleren/ the mind sculptor. I'd really suggest adding them, if you can come across them. Jace the ms not just for the mill, but his control is amazing.
Also, the thing i really notice about this deck, is that if you were going up against a really fast deck, you'd be left wide open for a bit of it.
Yeah, you got some counter spells, but lets say a swarm deck was dishing out goblins left and right, you only have 8 creatures that could block, and they're not very strong ones, at that.
Mill is slow, so i'd suggest adding a few walls. Wall of tanglecord would help, seeing how its an artifact, and could really aid your metalcraft.
Hope I could help.