Hi shanamave, i'm MagicHunter, other noob.I'll give you some advices how a friend give me when i built my first card deck in this page. I hope they help you.The first thing who you need to see when you build a deck, it's the mana curve. You got a lot of cards that consume 4 manas and few cards of 1 or 2 manas (and one card of 12 mana, is too many mana cost. Change it to another more cheaper). The only way for play the strategy you propose is the luck (you need a very lucky hand for get that the strategy begin). If you can not play some creatures of 1 or 2 manas before the end of your third shift you'll play with disadvantage, because the rival could have played any creature in the previous turns (2 creatures under your control before the end third turn should be the minimum).Second, the lands. You dont need so many dual lands, with 4 is sufficient. Change 8 dual lands for islands and swamp. The dual lands enters to the battlefield tapped, so that you need wait one turn until use their mana.In summary, remove some cards of 4 mana and choose some cards of 1-2 manas.I repeat, i hope serve you all this.A greeting. MagicHunter.
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This is my first deck who i made for create an overload army, but i'm not sure on how to improve it. I began with this game two weeks ago and i loved. I want to improve but i need some help for taht, if anyone can give me some advice, i´ll thank.