Updated, PLEASE let me know what you think
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Surprisingly it worked pretty well I won 3/5 matches and 7/12 games. I would have taken another game if I had payed attention to the Bump in the Night in my graveyard, it was a close one though. My biggest problem was the lightening bolt in my deck which, as it turns out is the only card I failed to check for tournament legality. (Whoops!) I'll probably throw in some burn or tragic slip a bit later to fix my screw-up.
I made some changes based on your thoughts, which I feel helped a lot. I decided to take advantage of red a bit to speed up my deck. Since I removed Vampire Nocturnus I also removed the Sphere of the Suns considering my most expensive card is now only 4 cmc. I would have gone with fervor if it cost 1 less to cast but I wasn't sure I could justify it for 3, I'm sure I'll end up being wrong and adding it in. I may also sideboard a couple of the Rakish Heirs in the future. I'm excited to see how I fair tonight at FNM, thanks for your suggestions, let me know what you think of my changes!