vaan104

lower the land count and add some land ramp cards like harrow. xenagos planeswalker would be good and id think about adding fetchlands. lightning bolt would be nice for creature removal also

id put ugin, tasigur, and silugmar into the main and swap dig for treasure cruise

isn't 4 urborg to much?

goblin guide might be nice or vexing devil

I think it needs a bit more mill mindshrieker is good jace, memory adept is awesome

maybe add xenagos, god of revels?

some card draw like mind's eye and bident of thassa might be nice

cabal coffers would help mana ramp and its not phyrexian but grey merchant of asphodel would be nice in here and you can get better kill spells, go for the throat, doom blade, ultimate price, hero's downfall, murderous cut

add fetchlands?

ive done 10 sample hands and I haven't even been close to the combo I think inkmoth nexus might make the deck a little more consistent but another problem is if your opponent goes 1st and gets a blocker your deck will be done

add cabal coffers and you really need more devotion whip of erebos would be good obliterator would be awesome. bloodghast and vampire nighthawk are good ones

if you want a fun combo with gary just use gift of immortality with gary and a sac engine

add monastery mentor?

ya slaughter games wont hit land I guess just stick to pithing needle if wasteland, etc become a problem

dig through time is better then treasure cruise when used in a combo deck

ive only played my list 3 times and I was faced with massive board hate and had slow starts so I got my ass kicked all 3 times. in my play group im kind of seen as the big bad so if I bring a new deck to the table everyone hits me. tonight I might try it again but im going to try my new nekusar deck 1st.
http://www.mtgvault.com/vaan104/decks/give-us-a-hug/

jace, memory adept works great with sidisi his +1 lets you draw 1 and mill 1. parallel lives is great to. if you are willing to get some spendy cards doubling season and crucible of worlds are nice. sheoldred, whispering one is great to
this is my sidisi deck I went more to the zombie theme
http://www.mtgvault.com/vaan104/decks/sidisi-edh/
I also run gaea's blessing and ulamog, the infinite gyre so I don't deck myself
my deck needs to be updated a little but its close

I think you need more land I don't like less then 36 land in edh and you don't have the tri color land in here and chasm skulker would be a good creature

i know its a great deck i just hate that any noob with $ could net deck it and win unless its facing control twin has a great chance of pulling its combo on turn 4 if not it stalls with its own control

i hate twin its a $1000+ deck with a simple combo that wins anyone can play it and win if they can afford the deck