Raphael4

i think u should add path to exile, birds of paradise, cerodon yearling and lightning helix

sounds very interesting and cool, i would personally suggest putting in 4 lost in the woods then adding maybe, birds of paradise and lanowar elves for some mana ramp to lost in the woods as you have no blockers here. i would also suggest 4 dungrove elders and take out the primordial hydra, its not needed. that would mean that you would have 2 planeswalkers, garruk relentless( avery good idea for this deck) 4 lost in the woods and 4 dungrove elders giving you a total of 10 nonland cards while you will still have 50 forests:)

looks like a cool and really effective deck.

no goblin grenade or lightning bolt??

i your deck based around helix pinnacle solely? or is it just their for a reason unknown, because to be honest, it doesnt really look like it will be fast or easy enough to win with helix pinnacle

looks like a cool deck, how does it play though? do u have all the cards?

why the manalith? you can use leaden my, solemn simalcrum, mycosinth wellspring.

how come? you only have 6 dragons and they are all weak dragons, atleast switch out volcanic dragon for rorix bladewing, other than that, i cant help you if you're nt gonna see how you can fix this deck. atleast take out 1 incinerate for the deck to be 60.

i would say either myr propagator as he is expensive for a 1/1 pplus its 3 mana too put only 1 1/1 down, or myr turbine, it requires you to tap 5 myr's, its expensive and most likely, u will already have the myr's available because of the consistency, i would definietly say add 4 overseers.

i love this deck, its pretty cool, but where is your steel overseer?

oh, by the way, no offense but how old are you? just curious because this deck is hmmm.... pretty terrible but, i will try to help you fix it.

i'm going to assume that you are fairly new to magic, i don't know if you are, so please dont take this offensively, im trying to help you. First, i hope that you are aware that this site gives you acces to every single card in the history of magic, with that in mind, you are able to make any deck the way you want it with the correct cards so that your deck will the right cards for the specific deck that you want to make, now. if you want this to be a succesful, fast and strong burn deck u must undertsand that u need to be able to play cards on your first turn, for most burn decks, the cards should be 3 mana cost or less so that you are able to play them on your first truns and multiple burn spells on your third turn, for example if you have 3 lands down on turn 3, you can a shock, lightning bolt and lava spike, these are all 1 mana cost burn spells. this deck has far to many creatures for a burn deck. the creatures are fairly high mana cost and wont be able to do anything for a while. this deck is way too slow. also, cards like balduvian barbarians are too high mana cost for a burn deck and dont do anything, they have haste and are very easy targets for removal spells, you know what dude, i could go on for an hour telling you everything that's wrong with this deck, but if u need specific help, just ask, ok? but i'm just trying to help, not trying to be mean.

looks like a cool deck, i like it.

multicolor lands is what u need, stuff like rupture spire

this looks like a rly good naya deck, props:)

Mishra, artificer prodigy, worst EDH general ever! :D

dude, scarecrows are freaking beast! they are without a doubt the coolest creature type, u have just inspired me to make a scarecrow edh deck. :)

more dragonS! right now, u only have 6 dragons, and they are some of the weakest. take out the burn spells, i would have say, only 4 lightning bolts and maybe 2 shocks. put in bogardan hellkite or bailfire dragon. have 4 seething songs and take out ghitu and dwarven ruins, addd 4 smoldering spires, much more useful and more likely to draw. take out circle of flame its 2 mana and a waste of 2 spots in your deck it barely does any damage, most of the time it wont be lethal. u need to have exactly 60 cards, 24 lands i'd say. take out crimson mage for lightning greaves, u should keep the walls though. but, volcanic dragon sucks, look up rorix bladewing, its a lot better. u also need 4 dragonspeaker shamans, other than that, it looks good.

looks like a good deck, u can check out my jund token overrun deck here:

http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=283969

looks like a good deck, it looks fun to.