here is my RDW based on the very same principles http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=144379
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^^^ correction ^^^ I meant to say drop the 2 Tec edges and 1 Mountain. also the use of fetch lands would be a good touch as well speeding the deck up and thinning out land draws. lands should look like this: 4x Arid Mesa 4x Scalding Tarn 4x Teetering Peaks 8x Mountain
i would swap 4x Kargan dragonlords for 4x Goblin guides. also drop 3x Mountains and 1x Chandra nalaar for 4x Ember hauler. very solid deck. the proliferate + shrine + Koth = nice mechanic use.
if you dont understand the concept behind fetch lands then you will prob lose. its like the only thing right this guy did in making this deck.
first off i would like to say this: your deck name is a rip off of mine. my deck was posted 2 months prior to this monstrosity. secondly my deck is more refined and functions the way a vampire deck should, where are your blade of the bloodchiefs? see the ORIGINAL team edward here : http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=61671
thats what i meant lol
lol rename it to holocaust 2.0