Frey

I made a deck like your's is there anything I should change?
https://www.mtgvault.com/frey/decks/emo/

I have a GREAT card choice for you I think you should use over Slithering Shade. "Whip of Erebos".

Of course! Haha.

You know is actually funny, I was trying to build this exact same deck concept earlier but then stopped. Like from me!

The deck has mana fixing problems because you don't run just dual lands but you run 8 forest, 5 islands, 3 plains, 3 swamps, and 3 mountains which means drawing duplicates of lands and not having all 5 five colors to cast Reaper King. I understand finding basic lands for cards like Cultivate but you should only run 1 copy of each basic land, not multiple. If you don't fix this problem, you truly don't care for the perfect of completing this deck.

The problem with magic is lands don't do anything. What you talk about "which is the equilibrium of fast development vs post development material". If you made a completely colorless deck, than lands such as Westvale Abbey could be a untapped mana source and an additional card.

I'd take out 2x Wolfir Silverheart for 2 more lands.

What do you need help with?

I am only a perfectionist and I want the people around me to have the best possible decks because it really is a beautiful thing having everyone with perfect decks so this is why I am about tot say what I am to say. I think you should look at cheap but more effective decks with better cards and ditch this deck. If you need help, I can make you any deck you want, I just need ideas on what you want to make for what price. Ill give you a consistent perfect powerful deck.

Thank you.

I am so sorry to disappoint you, I knew you expected more from a random deck online. Let me just title the whole deck to all your guy's issue with the deck. Then anyone who sees and likes this will already know. Sorry I just thought that everyone would get a kick out of the fact its a 1 card instant win for a commander. Never said it couldn't be stopped easily.

awww thanks, and sorry to hear that about mana severance.

Lol kk I understand, I am just pushing the concept that we all need to build super interesting decks. I fail at this sometimes.

Trevor it's damon. I think you should try to make a primal surge turbo deck that runs creatures that search or dig for it. Also I think you should run creatures that benefit all other creatures. Like imagine 1 copy of all the enchantment creatures and imagine all your creatures were indestructible hasty hexproof unblockable infect 20/20's XD

You need to run 2 seraph sanctuiary,

Yes thats true. For some reason, VIRIDIAN LONGBOW went up in price and now im sad.

rip/.............

Thank you very much.

Thank you very much.

Thank you a lot. Imma gonna make a cool deck in a couple days, elementals.