dragin17

ok for me to help u u need to first know wha u want to do with this deck wha combo do u want to use the most n if it fails have alternant win conditions

i would sugest u grab tendrils of coruption n get rid of all the other lands take a look a my vmpire deck
no fech lands
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=93998

dont run black sun for hexmage can only save one creature for it removes counters from one pernament not all black sun was made for black infect n sum proliferate black blue but not vamps

http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=161069 if ur deck would go up against sumthing like this it would most likely lose because it hasno artifact kill

this is a link to a cards tha ive found very usefull in my own vampire deck know as guul draz assassin http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewCard_Popup.aspx?CardName=Guul Draz Assassin&Edition=ROE&Print=1

ok i can see where u r goin with this deck but for a vampire deck if u like draw power try gettin more lifegain like child of night a 2 cost 1/2 with lifelink ,phyrexian arena is a great card to use in a black deck tha uses life gain cause in exchange of one life u get an extra card every turn and using cards like tendrills of corruption or even corruption will replenish the life u lose n more n if i were u i would think about grabbing kalestria bloodchief for she is grea at clearing fields and then swiping for major damage

one no one runs emrakul for he is the worst of the 3 due to his cost for most games r done with by ur 7th tun at most unless ur both noobs the assassin requires 8 mana over al to get him up there someone can be a jerk n kill it once it a 2/2 for 6 mana. his curent deck make up alows him todestroy n stall while his main cards like quest do the major damage he doent need many creatures s long as he forces his opponent to discard their hand its goin to end up bein a one sided match i build a replica of this deck n beat 5 different people with it all experianced so congrats on makin a usable deck

if this deck uses lifelink then grab nigthawk its a 2 3 black vampire creature that costs 2 black one any to summon has flying deathtouch and lifelink its the best card in any vampire deck no one wants to block it due to deathtouch look at my vampire deck and ull see what i mean by life gain

try some tendrils of corruption to replace the corrupt its basically the same effect but hurts creatures only for # of swamps u control and only costs 4 mana u can have it in ur sideboard nd use as u please i try useing both depends on the situation on wether i can get enough mana in time

do u like pulse traker a 1/1 vamp creature cost one black to summon and when it attacks it deals 1 damage to all opponents and Mephidross Vampire who is a nasty little 3/4 with Flying Each creature you control is a Vampire in addition to other creature types and has "Whenever this creature deals damage to a creature, put a +1/+1 counter on it."

u also should know u cant have more than one baneslayer out on the field at the same time in tournaments it goes for all legendary creatures also plainswalkers with the same subname

ur welcome and have u seen hedron field pursists its a lvl creature than can prevent incomin damage ive made myself a wall of them 3 lvl 5 each preventin 2 damage from all sources so it would take 7 damage at once for them to hit me for 1 it takes a little bit of effort but in the long run if ur lifegain deck does help u last for a while these creatures will make it almost impossible for them to hurt u take a look at them and use them if u like

Also a good creature to have is stillmoon cavalier can be payed with either black or white mana and is very powerful for such a small creature 3 different effect 2 costin only one b or w one gives it flying another gives it first strike and the last gives it a +1/0 but cost 2 of either b or w sad part is that it only lasts till the end of the turn but for only 3 mana to summon a creature with so much potential its perfect for ur bw deck

nice deck but what about guys that can kill off ur opponent in the time it takes u to get 5 mana u could be killed off by big creatures and no way to stop it try rearanging the deck so u can block attackswith like darkness, safe pasage, sudden spoiling all these cards would help prevent damage to ur advantage. i prefer sudden spoiling for it makes all target opponents creatures 0/2 until end of turn its an instant and tis could help kill off their best creatures with ur weaker ones

why not pulse tracker its a vamp that cost only one black and deals one damage automatically when it attacks use it in my vamp deck with 4 night hawks

interesting deck whats its main goal looks like one would build with random cards one would grabed from packs lol no offence

there u go that works and seein they r so cheap online mabe a set of 4 for a $ its not that much to ask lol

this could end up being a good deck buy after a couple hands i noticed that u need a better flow of mana with any 2-5 mana deck u need lands that give u one or the other so try cards that give u either red or black so u can summon creatures easier

fauna shaman is a very good creature for any green deck it cost only 2 mana on green and one anything and its effect allows u to search ur deck for a creature card by discardin a creature card which is very helpfull

what about ajani goldmane and ajani's mantra each give out major life usefull in any life gain deck