You should run fog, or terrifying presence to allow you some time to get to your high mana cost creatures. Here check out my deck http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=353027
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This is a red deck.... Not a white... Here, check out mine http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=353027
Yeah you definetlu have too many creatures. All you need is 4 champions, 4 hero of bladehold, and 4 elite inquistor. Then change out all those useless creatures for increasing devotion, gather the townsfolk, intangible virtue. I run a white weenie deck, no planeswalker. Click on my name and check out my deck named, ground war
Costs too much mana. The most mana needed should be tops 6 mana. To cadt to creatures and spells
This deck is cheap to create and is still very eff.ective. If a plaer was willing to spend more money on cards then I would recommend trading out benalish calvary for 4 hero of bladehold, and put in 2 elspeth teral