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Curses are something I'm relatively new with, so any help with this deck to make it run a bit smoother would be perfect. Thank you.

I've always enjoyed Enchantment decks. I've made several on my own, and they're one of my best decks. I like your's, a lot, but there is one thing that bothers me some. Your incredible lack of Invisible Stalkers bothers me greatly. He is one of the best cards ever for an enchantment deck. Hexproof and Unblockable. You can't get much better than that. If you'd like to see mine, here's the link: http://www.mtgvault.com/ifonly/decks/aura-mastery-2/

If you really want to mill someone out, and do it damn quickly, like you're trying to do, why not a few Jace's Erasures? For every card you draw, they mill a card. They'd be milling like hell and you could still keep your alternative win condition. I would also suggest an Arcanis the Omnipotent. He's a fun way to draw cards and he's not too too expensive for what he can help you do. Also, low drop draw cards would help this deck immensely, such as Gitaxian Probe and Think Twice.

More Ajani's Pridemate, get ride of Greed, Devout Champions and the Chalice's. You can sideboard Revoke Existence, unless you know someone in your play group is using artifacts or enchantments. Replace Devout Champion and Soulmender with a Falidar Sovereign and some Champion of the Parish, another Angel of Thune, Safe Passage, and more Doomblades/Go For The Throat. Maybe an Imposing Sovereign or two.
The only thing I think this deck is missing is some power. Something to stop an attacker from running over you once they have the cards to do so. You need something that'll stop someone from messing with you until you can get your life total high enough to actually not care if someone hits you.

Geist Snatch would be a good way to get out token spirits. Sky Spirit is an easy drop 2/2 flyer with first strike. Oyobi Who Split The Heavens is a boss spirit card, especially if you're focusing on arcane or spirit cards. You could also sideboard Disenchant, or replace it with Revoke Existence (Same drop, but exiles it instead).
Latch Seekers is a good unblockable spirit that has won me a game or two.
Also, I would take out Shriekgeist, Mindshrieker, and Stormgeist, as they all are pretty useless to a spirit deck. The rest of these are fine. Unless you find more spirit cards that are actually worth while, just keep the deck basic, with the captains and the boosts.

I would focus more on low drop creatures. I know its just from crap cards you had lying around, but if you honestly want the deck to run quickly and win, keep your eye out for cheap creatures that can do things that expensive ones can. Detain is also an overrated ability, in my opinion. You're better off going with a straight control deck, rather than a detainment deck.

Not a huge fan of the Phyrexian Crusaders, or the Undead Alchemist. I would also suggest more control in the deck, such as more kill spells or more counter spells. I also would put in some zombie drakes or cards that grant till end of turn flying, instead of a 3 drop enchantment.

I've had this idea floating around in my head for quite some time. I'm not sure if I can pull it off effectively, but I'm sure going to try. If you see any ideas for suggestions for the deck, please let me know. Thank you.

What could I take out to put in the Gravecrawlers? I've looked over the deck and I have strategies for some of the cards in it, but I'm having trouble taking cards out. What would you recommend?

I could make it private, but why would I pass up on free advice? I'm not a mtg master, so someone with more experience could always help me make this deck better.

love the fact that you have It That Betrays in the deck. Very classy move for a black deck. But have you considered Grave Pact for the deck? That way, when you sac a creature and everyone else has to as well, you'll get them all with It That Betrays. Also, Small Pox might be a fun addition to this deck. Very fun little card to use, especially early game.

My second attempt at making a token deck. This focusing more on overwhelming enemies with a massive force, rather than just using Crusader and Geist-Honored Monk to do all the damage.

I'm new to the whole tournament rulings, but this is my first attempt at building a tournament worthy deck. If anything would work better than what I have, please point it out to me and I'll see if I can change it, while still keeping in tournament legality.
Thank you.

Thank you for the advice. I didn't think about Quicksilver amulet, even though someone in my play group uses it all the time.

This is, by far, the most evil deck I've ever seen. It's insane that you can actually finish your opponent before they are even able to play a spell. I just have to steal this and use it for my own. Thank you so much for just saying game over, turn 1.

I like what you've said, and I've tried to focus it a little more on Spirits and Saprolings with Trostani giving me life. With Crusader of Odric and Pennon Blade out there, I should get be able to pop out quite a few tokens.
Thank you for all your help, and if you see anything else you could help out with, please say so. I'm happy to take all the advice I can get.

Honestly, I've only ever lost with the deck 1 time. At times, I wish had more of something, but would rather not have the deck go over 60 cards, so I make do with what I can. I understand completely with what you are saying, and that's actually how I went about making this deck. Every card in this deck has a purpose and has fulfilled that purpose time and again. The only card that I could even take out, or rather sideboard is Redirect.

Actually, I was going to do that with a different deck. A completely blue deck with draw cards and 4 levelers and 4 maniacs.

So, I'm still a little green behind the ears when it comes to MTG, I'm hoping that someone can come up with some ideas for me to improve this deck with. I don't have a lot of these cards in real life, but I'm in the process of slowly building this deck. Any and all help with greatly welcomed.
Thank you.

With Notion Thief and Whispering Madness in the same deck, I would recommend a Psychosis Crawler or 4. A bit more aggressive than an army of drakes generated by Talrand.