SharpRaptor

Army of the damned?

reliquary towers a deffinate for this deck

Champion of the parish?

I really do like this idea, how does it do competetively?

Seems legit, good idea

Congrats on building your first Commander Deck
Like the idea, consider Penon Blade for more equiment buffs
Also consider the new Gideon, Chamion of Justice

if you have time, please look at my new commander deck:
http://mtgvault.com/sharpraptor/decks/damia-edh-v2/

What would you suggest i got rid of then?

Which slivers would you suggest removing then? So that i can add in cards like you suggested?

Seems like a well thought out deck i like it

That seems like a good idea, may look into it

This just seems, hilarious :D good job i love how cruel this seems yet at the same time just funny XD

GREAT IDEA :D

the amoeboid changeling is so that i can nick other peoples creatures by turning them into slivers and then using overlords second ability to steal them, however the automoton seems good i will think about it thanks.

You need more land mate, 20 overall doesnt give you a solid base and with angels they are all expensive so you need to never miss a land drop. I had a deck like this and i splashed green so that i had mana ramp and i could use sigarda. Consider avacyn angel of hope aswell, everything indestrctable is always good

Splinter twin your veneratied teacher

I thought that was the right amount of lands originally too, but then i was told depending on the type of deck you should really have between 21 and 26 lands i think but if only 20 lands works then well played :)

I am inclined to disagree with some of the points on here but at the same time i can see where you are coming from on this, just because a deck has a lot of singletons in it sometimes just means its got more versatlility. For example one of my friends decks has a lot of singletons and because of this has multiple winning strategies and will win about 75% of the time in games I have seen:
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=350039

But I do know what you are getting at in terms of making sure u have a win condition you are aiming towards and that you have a way to make it there as I have seen some decks on this sight which have no aim in them atall and sometimes dont even have any lands in them.

Please take a minute to look at my Wurm's Armageddon Deck
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=347832

good call, that would be a great idea especially if it was indestructible

This looks like it would be good fun to play :p especially in multiplayer

Here is my Wurm's Armageddon Deck:
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=347832
First deck i made by myself so pointers welcome :)

Looked at and commented on Assassin's Creed Deck now gonna look at some more :)