Take those creatures and artifacts out...you shouldnt try to win by damage in a mill deck so dont worry about them. Also, you should work on that mana curve. Take a look at my mill deck http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=125385
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you should put in liliana's caress
Jungle lion seems fairly useless...perhaps basking rootwalla or tree monkey would be better...although barbary apes seems to be more versatile. If you could, splashing red for incandescent soulstroke would solve all of your problems related to that force of savagery. So this deck looks like it would die out pretty quick...you need to keep the momentum going. I'd suggest regal force because your hand gets drained so quickly. If you need it, summoner's pact is good too for trying to get that force of savagery.
Splashing black for some dimir-like effects would be cool, but this deck looks nevertheless very unique. Good job!
You should splash blue for Scion of the Ur-Dragon
You're just distracting yourself with all of the non-elf creatures that are here. Add arbor elf for extra mana excel and copperhorn scout as well. Use your mana to activate ezuri, then attack with your team, untapping everything with copperhorn scout so that you can tap them for ezuri mana again. Personally I'd use strength of the Tajuru instead of overwhelming stampede, but that's nitpicking more or less.
celestial mantle
Shadow creatures=no, especially in a deck like this. Distress, castigate, and duress are all inferior to thoughtsieze if you have the cash. If you're into counterspells, mana tithe is good too (in reference to dash hopes.) Orzhov basilica is pretty bad imo...it sets you back quite a bit mana wise. More removal would be good, especially vindicate. Your creatures ought to extend to white...Deathbringer Liege or stillmoon cavalier? I don't think that creatures should be treated simply as finishers like this... Lastly, Necromancer's Covenant would be powerful in a deck with this much stuff going into the graveyard...or perhaps debtor's knell would be somewhat ridiculous as well.
play pariah on stuffy doll
some tutors to help get out the stuffy doll and guilty conscience? instants with split second to force them through? more mass removals? I would add all of these things to a deck like this.
Seems awfully hard to get all of that out, even with removal and counterspells. Also, ivory mask isnt in this decklist. Did you mean leyline of sanctity? Enduring ideal would solve most of your problems imo.
coat of arms?
the only time I can see pygmy hippo being at all helpful is if the opponent runs omnath, locus of mana
splashing eldrazi seems unnecessary and confusing...also 4 copperhorn scouts are too many due to the fact that once you already have one out any more end up being useless. blunt the assault is too mana intensive...just get fog, thats enough w/o the life gain if you insist on the eldrazi aspect, you might want to consider adding omnath, locus of mana and possibly joraga treespeaker
coat of arms? eldrazi monument? mirari's wake & overgrowth > fertile ground I feel like some things such as elvish warrior are unnecessary...perhaps more elvish archdruids would be good for manafixing as well & elvish harbinger is good if you deck is really inconsistent, which I could see as a problem.