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I will also post this in your deck because at the moment the notification for the forum doesn't work.
The most important thing to do is to ad a good description of what and especially how you want to achive it.
The more information's you can give the community the better the help will be. This can include basic things like legality, budget, and so on. If you want further info's on that I can recommend you this article deck:
http://www.mtgvault.com/muktol/decks/why-you-should-add-description/

Also if you need general help with deckbuilding you could take a look at :
http://www.mtgvault.com/muktol/decks/how-to-build-a-deck/
This is an article deck I have translated/ enchanced that features the most basic rules of deckbuilding.