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Yeah its supposed to be 100 cards including the general. Generally I follow 66 normal cards+33 lands+the general=100

Not enough mana ramp... Get some more fetchlands or reduce the mana cost and it might work...

Pretty good. You might want to consider putting in Platinum Emperion to counter reanimate and vampiric tutor.

This is actually a lot like the deck i play in standard, minus the onmoths, oracles, and quests, and add in elvish archdruid, Bellowing Tanglewurm, and Khalni Hydra. I also have more ascetisms because I find myself playing blue black and red quite often. Maybe we could bounce ideas off of each other. Nice Deck.

Thanks man. I fixed it.

Ok thanks... I edited it to be slightly ramp. Replaced Duskdale with Sledge and Pelakka with Explore.
How's dat?

Gosh I wish that there was a way to PM you. Now I have to explain Archenemy in a comment on my own deck :(

Archenemy is a new type of magic game where one player, the Archenemy, has 15 extra large cards called schemes. Schemes have no mana cost. These schemes are incredibly powerful cards that usually tip the game in the Archenemy which is why all other players in a game are playing against the Archenemy. I'm not sure about how the schemes work, but they're extremely powerful and all have arrogant names. Some of the Schemes from Bring about the Undead Apocalypse are:

Dance, Pathetic Marionette
When you set this scheme in motion, each opponent reveals cards from the top of his or her library until he or she reveals a creature card. Choose one of the revealed creature cards and put it onto the battlefield under your control. Put all other cards revealed this way into their owners' graveyards.

Every Hope Shall Vanish
When you set this scheme in motion, each opponent reveals his or her hand. Choose a nonland card from each of those hands. Those players discard those cards.

I Delight in your Convulsions
When you set this scheme in motion, each opponent loses 3 life. You gain life equal to the life lost this way.

Mortal Flesh is Weak
When you set this scheme in motion, each opponent's life total becomes the lowest life total among your opponents.

So yeah...

Will this work on a Goblin Deck? I know it's all counter burn and stuff, but goblins are cheap. I just think this deck is too prone to getting mana screwed. No Offense.

Also Bestial Menace is good for tokens. It's a sorcery.
1/1 Green Snake
2/2 Green Wolf
3/3 Green Elephant

I don't know about anyone else, but if I see a good deck I fight to keep it in the Top Deck section. Second to last is R/W defender. Look at it. It's ingenious! I didn't make it, but I support it 100% and wish I had the cards to make it. But everyone has to be a immature batch and down to support their own decks.

Speaking of top decks 10/10
You should have BFM attack anyone who downs without comment.

Yeah actually you should look into these cards.

Awakening Zone 2G
Enchantment

At the beginning of your upkeep, you may put a 0/1 colorless Eldrazi Spawn creature token onto the battlefield. It has "Sacrifice this creature: Add 1 to your mana pool."

Ant Queen 3GG
Creature (5/5)

1G: Put a 1/1 green Ant Token into play.

I think it's pretty good. 9/10. But why did you name it Gideon Jura Control. Maybe Gideon Jura Defender.

P.S. You should add red to this. Vent Sentinel, Ogre Sentry and Wall of Fire are all great defender cards.

Thanks for your opinion. I never realized how weak to spells this was. I've added some counters in the sideboard for support.

And Wall of Faith and Soulbound Guardians would go great in the sideboard, in my opinion.

I really like this deck. As soon as a I saw the title I thought of Stalwart Shield Bearers and Ogre Sentry. And Perimeter Captain and Vent Sentinel really bring it home. Wise choice with the land amount, considering everything is so cheap.

But does Gideon Jura have a point as part of the theme of is just in cause he's powerful?

And disentomb would help yes

It's in From the Vault: Dragons.
Ebon Dragon 5BB
Creature — Dragon (5/4)
Flying
When Ebon Dragon enters the battlefield, you may have target opponent discard a card.

Not sure. I'm thinking about putting Ebon Dragon in it.

Yeah how do you pay? :P