TheSwarmer

I must say it looks quite decent, I like the inclusion of titi as it both stalls in a very significant way and provides a great threat if not answered, and answering it will require them to invest a turn and some resoures into it and that's not ideal either.

I'd like to know how ppl decide to play against it once they know what you're up to.

One change I would make is play 1 less to the slaughter seeing as how you have 6 ways to kill walkers. Not sure what to play insteasd, a languish maybe?

One of my friends is going to play something similar, I'm looking forward to seeing how it will preform in our small meta.

A lot of work in fact

Yop, no point in it, you'll want the basics for blood moon and path. For path it doesn't matter what color they are and with moon you don't want them to be mountains.

WOW! I absolutely love this one! Not sure what to say really, maybe 1 more Stream of Consciousness or some mana sources that are not lands, thouh that might slow it down too much.

Not sure, I think I'd put in 1 raven's crime and after that I have no idea, wrench mind, signed in blood or anything that draws you cards when creatures die. Again, bot sure, this would require testing I think.

Well creature heavy it certainly is, but that is a good thing when you are running a zombie tribal deck.
Maybe you could cut the dark rits? Not sure I think this is where you have to actually play the deck or hit the draw sample hand button a thousand times to know for sure/semi-sure.

Yeah it's one of the songs you never froget about.
As for the deck I don't think it could stand against most modern or legacy decks (pretty sure that ws not the point either) but for casual this seems amazing!

I especially like the inclusion of pox as it is one of my favorite cards, and it seems like it would work pretty well here.

I can only count to four :D

I'm not sure how good 3 color decks are in this standard, especially ones that don't run 3-4 languish, but this sure looks great.
When i doubt jund 'em out! Nothing more to say really :D

At bfz prerelease I stole a couple of matches using these, the "filler" cards can often get in 4-7 damage early on.

Pfff, amatures, BEARS is where it's at!

I like the idea a lot, not sure what I'd change, looks pretty good for a wolf deck.

Whoops! Did not notice the Ghost Quarter, anyway stuff like blighted fen, was maintly think of blighted fen and Ghost Quarter there.

Vengeful Pharaoh would be an sb card in my metta, but in yours it might me an mvp.
1 darkblast could be cut, or a one-of anything.

One last thing, I feel like Lotleth Troll is too strong to be only a 2 of. Especially with you having 23 things you want to discard.

With 3 lftl I'd run more toolbox lands and also some retrace cards.

Delirium seems kinda weak, as for vengevines I think they are not a must but I'd run then.

I think it is a modern sb card, in delver and control mirrors.

It's so tragic how little attention these decks get, they're amazing!
hough sadly I don't know enough about vintage or legacy to give any advice at all.

Sounds about right. When I taught ppl how to play I explained the 5 colors then the 2 color combinations and did all the stuff you did from there.
Except here in Slovakia it's pretty hard to make people understand everything.

Well....... Rly not sure, ask her waht she'd like to play, playsyle-wise and take it from there.
Also for what format and and how competitive?