Zherlthish

try to add Blind Obedience just to control the board... it's a source of gain/lose life. =)

Very nice concept. I really like the Simic Fluxmage and Undying combo. Add a couple of Vorapede just in case you'll be stalled by mass creature removal, which takes you as a midrange vs. aggro.

I have built my dimir deck. I was wondering if you can also comment or make suggestions. Thank you!

http://mtgvault.com/zherlthish/decks/discombobulate-help-please/

I would suggest adding some counters to prevent couple of control cards. Pretty much I love your deck, same as what I've created. Please comment as well:

http://mtgvault.com/zherlthish/decks/discombobulate-help-please/

LONG LIVE DIMIR!!! :P

I wil consider removing Broker and Grisly, but prolly keep Essence since I really enjoy the combo when you have Consuming Abberation in play. :)

Will prolly replace them with Sever the Bloodlines or Tragic Slips...

As for the Specter, it only hit me that you still have to cast them.. Wow! That was a noob in my part, didn't notice that I still need to cast them. Hahaha! So yeah, prolly change the lands with duality of either swamp or island and add a couple of Chromatic Lantern. Thank you so much for pointing that out. ;)

I've placed Gridlock before but since a lot of cards have Hexproof or will give hexproof, I'd rather have global effect card like Aetherize... Might consider as a sideboard...

Thank you for the comments! :)

It's okay... The first time I made the deck and placed all the cards I wanted, I ended up with 100+ cards! LOL.

I thought of the oyher cards but they only mill 2-3 cards except for dread waters and mindcrank. I want to keep it creature- based and massive wheb I mill... Actually the ultimate combo I want to do is the Consuming Abberation + Essence Harvest in one turn. *evil laugh*... LMAO!

Mind funeral would already fall under modern bro.. Trying to keep the deck standard, though if I make it into modern, alot of nasty cards will be included. :)

Thank you for the comment.

add at least 2 Essence Harvest just so you can make use of your big creatures... :)

yeah... I've been thinking about that but I have drained my resources and don't have enough left to buy another set of cards. =( will see... but thank you for the feedback! =)

Thank you so much ninja for your very constructive criticism. I was already expecting those since I've tried playing this deck last Sunday and got burned by Rakkdos... was able to win against Selensya though. But still, I saw the dyssynergy or the deck because there was alot of things going on.

Anyway, I'm currently constructing a heavy control Azorius with Jace, MA as my winning condition.

I have the following cards, and was wondering if you can help me construct it better:
Supreme Verdict, Detention Sphere, Terminus, Cyclonic Rift, Jace MA, Tamiyo, Snapcaster Mage, and a couple of different counter spells.

Ninja, I look forward to your response. Thank you so much! =)

Please help me with my deck. Thank you!

Guys, please help... :(

but of course! duh! hahaha... thank you for pointing it out. made the necessary revisions. =)

Thank you! I hope all is well on your tourney... by the way, made some revisions since my last upload. :)

Updated last 03AUG2012:

Yipee! Did 4th place for my first FNM! Teehee! ^_^

Main Deck:
(-): 4x Birds of Paradise
(+): 2x Redirect, 2x Beast Within
Side Board:
(-): 2x Beast Within, 2x Redirect
(+): 4x Flashfeeze

thank you so much for the suggestion. Actually, I made a similar deck - very much "Turbo Fog". I think the concept for the deck is just to annoy your opponents. LOL

here's the link for my other deck:

http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=365329

Thanks for the feedback Nate! I really appreciate it! I've been thinking about Staff of Nin but 4 is better than 6 though, plus you can increase your chances of drawing by adding more counters.

As for BV, Grafdigger's a big help, will try to consider that. But just to share, I chose Witchbane Orb due effects of BV is no match for it, so it's kinda' the same nonetheless. =)

Thanks for the great feedback Jake! I really appreciate it! Anyway, I was really thinking about DOJ and Divine Reckoning but was afraid of Surgical Extraction. I totally forgot about E.Wilds and Revoke Existence (better than Naturalize!). =)

Question: What if as you cast Teferi it gets countered? How will you go about it?

Your deck is quite good but like what Harriz said, this already falls under extended if not type 1. I'll also put a couple of Curse of Bloody Tomes and/or Jace's Erasure. =)