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Yeah that was the general consensus when i first posted this. I topped the hot page for 2 straight months

Howl of the Night Pack? Raised by Wolves? Wren's Run Packmaster?!?!

Avacyn, Angel of Hope; Darien, King of Kjeldor; Eight-and-a-Half-Tails; Eleah Norn, Grand Cenobite; Heliod, God of the Sun; Iona, Shield of Emeria; Konda, Lord of Eiganjo; Michiko Konda, Truth Seeker; Mikaeus, the Lunarch; Oyobi, Who Split the Heavens; Patron of the Kitsune; Reya Dawnbringer. All of these are white creatures that could be used as great commanders if you so choose. Pick one that looks good and try to make a deck that exploits its ability(s)

Ok i mean this in a nice helpful way, but you should try a different deck build. Using celestial kirin isnt going to really help you as much as you would think in an edh match because the amount of low cost spells that you could kill with his effect are going to be minimal. You would be better off using either a different commander or a new deck entierely. Im not saying you should net deck, but look at legendary creatures until you find one that you think you can absolutely demolish other people with. For example, im working on a commander deck using Sidisi, Brood Tyrant because i can fully exploit my graveyard, my opponents' graveyards, draw, discard, kill, reanimate, and mass zombie tokens all in a single deck with him at the head. Ive been working on this deck for almost 3 weeks now and im still trying to decide what to use in it for the final product. EDH decks are hard to build because they require large amounts of thought to construct. My first edh is a red/white with Iroas, God of Victory as its commander. The deck is designed to exploit the combat phase of my turn to the point where i could potentially have 5+ combat phases in a turn and still have room for more. Thats what you need to do with a commander deck. Find a legendary creature that you can exploit a billion times over and wipe all comers. I like the deck, i really do, but i think you can do better than this if you do a little legwork.

It needs work. It wouldn't hold up vs most edh decks truthfully Also,

http://mtgsalvation.gamepedia.com/Commander_(format)

No i get that, but things like godhead and nobilis cant be in there because they are considered multicolor cards and you cant use them with a mono colored commander. You need to read the rules for edh thoroughly before making a deck next time

only problem with the elf is that he is banned in modern, which is what i was trying to help you achieve. lightning bolt and colossal might are good for this deck

Don't know what to trade out for the kavu, but you can swap memory lapse with remand, assuming you can afford a playset of them

If celestial kirin is your commander then you cant use any other colors but white. Thats how edh works

i look at a lot of decks on here just to see what all is being put out, but i only comment if i think the comment might help or is warranted

if you want a slightly cheaper alternative to rattleclaw mystic then go with druid of the anima. Same cost but cheaper moneywise

Meh i like my aggro/midrange rakdos. Puts the screws to them early and is rather deadly in the later game too

Lightning axe + chandra's phoenix = win

he may be cheaper but the thing with sarkhan is that his +1 makes him targetable by domri's emblem. Think about that for a second

Proliferate doesnt even need to be in here because of the gilder bairn combo engine (gilder bairn + paradise mantle + training grounds = infinite doubling of counters).

As for changes i think tibalt should be swapped with the new sarkhan. It makes him a creature which would allow domri's emblem to apply to him.

heehee looks like my gilder bairn combo is still going strong. i would recommend swapping out tibalt with either xenagos or the newest sarkhan

I dont really know what improvements could be made, but i like this deck. Its incredibly well built for only being standard

nice. only problem is getting the emblem

if the altar is such a key component, then why are there only 2 in here?

ive only ever pulled one as well. i use him in my WG auras