Madrock

Don't forget Gargadon or anything that'll let you sacrifice a creature!!!

If goatnapper is going to be the centerpiece of this deck, then you need momentary blink. For standard legal, just take out Kavu Monarch for blink and congrats: red, white and blue 'napper deck.

Why do you want Mirror Entity if all of the rest of your creatures will be slivers already???

No. Apart from Arcanis's draw ability, you have no activated abiliy that can use Rings of Brighthearth. All you have are triggered effects

Ever thought of replacing Howling Mine with Jace?

This is like any Doran deck, except your mana base is skewed, and you didn't bring in Birds of Paradise. You need more pain lands, you need more doran (Doran is NOT the creature you want to search for with harbinger), and you need more Birds of paradise.

I'd be game to try a Standard legal zombie deck in this day and age... What you'd need would be Magus of the Abyss, raise what you need (or use Nether Traitor) and march to victory. In fact, I think I'll create such a deck myself!

It seems a bit out there, but I like this deck lots. No real combos apart from working clash: in fact, this deck is the most clash-effective deck I've ever seen! I'd put less creatures and more spells.

On the contrary, for such a deck, you want LESS creatures (unless it's early killers, like Goblin fanatics) and MORE enchantments. Run this as a majorly enchantment deck, with cheap 1-offs so as to run defense until you summon all of your Hondens. Control board and Honden to victory.

Here's the deal with gobbos: They're expensive now. I find myself running Festering Goblin for defense (or at LEAST Goblin Fanatic, hopefully buying me time to but the land work so I can summon my 3 and 4 drops. You NEED early game defense: either Fester or Fanatic.

So it's a G/W Kithkin deck... Without Gaddock Teeg? Please to explain, as you WILL be the target of multiple WoG.

You have a lot of costly cards, another option is Garruk Wildspeaker

This... is sketchy to the extreme. Ana Battlemage and HoE are both very expensive creatures, it will take you a lot of time before you play them and there is a good chance you get run-overed first. I'd actually suggest more Damnations just to stabalize the field in case of trouble.

Oh yeah, and rather then Akroma, you want Guile instead.

The problem is that your not drawing enough cards so as to always have a counter spell in hand. This is one deck where Howling Mine would be appreciated. And you certainly need Rule of Law! Remember, people can cast more then one spell per turn, and they will!

You have a lot of suspend BOMBS, but not enough early threats to allow early defense. What your deck needs more then anything is card acceleration so you can flood your opponent with threats until the suspended beat-sticks come in. Paradox Haze is your key card, but it's your only thing "accelerating" your game. Check my Reality Rift deck for ideas on how to "accelerate" your suspended threats.

I tried doing such a combo myself, but here's why Goblins are gone for me: if you destroy the blocker, hey congrats on destroying creatures. But if the Goblin goes through, then you're just doing a piddling 2 or 3 damage. Nothing! I suggest running Loxoddon Warhammer, just to give your opponent some incentive to BLOCK, Ahhh, I miss Cabal Slaver...

You have a lot of cards that you need to sacrifice at end of turn. Ever thought of running Greater gargadon into your deck?

Okay, this is straight black with just one green card. First of all, as a beater, I recommend Ascetic Troll over Goyf because it's totally untouchable. Then, as in all single beater card deck, you should put in Loxoddon Warhammer. Attach the Warhammer to Oona so as to force opponent's to discard even more cards as you heal. I'd actually make the deck straight black with Oona/Warhammer as your beater.

You're gonna get RAPED in the early game...