Kazzong

So, what could I do fix that? Any suggestions on something to replace the golems? It has to be a simple but powerful artifact creature.

Actually I wasn't going for modern. Just happened to pick cards from there. Open to all suggestions.

Yes, I see that. I know it isn't a bad deck. It just... It is just really bland. Not fun to play with or against because the counter spells. No chance in actually having to prove your skills as a good player,or even an incentive deck builder. In short, it has no style.

Again though, just to be clear, it isn't a BAD deck. Just a boring one.

and what qualifications, might I ask, do you have to say that my deck is junk? Just because it doesn't cost an arm and a leg, and isn't full of legacy/vintage uber power cards like force of will and such, does not mean it isn't a good deck. Oh and just. FYI, if you actually want people to take your advice seriously... Don't be so condescending.

Yes, i know the tutor isn't legal in any format other than casual. And if i was going to play this deck in anything else I would most certainly change that. also, if i was gonna play anything else with it, it would be modern, not legacy, because i know that it wouldn't have a chance against most of the overpowered cards in that format.

So... I see a lot of powerful cards here kinda thrown together with no cohesion. ???,

Hey, kromedone I don't appreciate that comment. I knew it was a joke deck. I just thought it was lame.

godsire+intruder alarm.

yup. It repeats until all opponents are dead, unless they have a platinum angel or phyrexian unllife or something like that.

yeah, actually I hae 2 that I would like some feedback on.

This is a deck that I made to teach people how to play magic. any suggestions on how I could improve on the design of the deck.
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=288785

this one is technically a battle cry deck based on goblin tunneller.
http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=327107

any feedback or advice that I could get would be great.

hm... not sure. That depends on what type of decks you usually would play against.

hey, calm down. There is not rule against creating a deck you don't own. In fact it is a great place to do deck blueprints for how you want a deck to be. I have done that for several decks that I have posted.

so, what is the theme that you are looking to follow in this deck? I see soldiers, and wizards, and... tokens...
so, what is the focus? If it isn't tribal (which seems to be the case here) then what is the goal that you are trying to hit with this deck? what makes the good combinations that could make the deck powerful, what could be improved?

How do the cards compliment each other to create synergy in the deck? I see lots of good cards, but no theme for how they are supposed to work together.

If you aren't sure what I mean by that look here:http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=325504

It isn't my deck, but it is a great example of how to create synergy between cards. :)

yes. Well done. :) thank you.

ah. I see. then yeah, birds would be better. :)

looks good. Although I still think that a nissa revane would be way good in here, along with a nissa's chosen. but, thats just my opinion. :) In all honesty I don't like commander or EDH, and I don't normally comment on that kind of deck. But I like this one a lot, and if I ever played those formats I would probably run something like this. :)

(revision) in a solder based deck, the hero would be better.

the one card you need for this would be grimoire of the dead. its like a rise from the grave... except on everything... all at once. :)

very nice. :) i love becken apparition. amazing card. :)

quirion elves would be good for you. 2 mana, and choose a color when they come into play. tap for green or the chosen color. for you... black. :)

I like the brainspoil, perhaps I might run that instead of the tutors. Also the tutors aren't always expensive depending on where you get them.